New rap lyrics, thoughts?

Instrumental is "Remember Me" by T.I.

Sometimes I think to myself that I should just vanish
Put on a sombrero, move south, start speakin Spanish
Just poof! and I'm gone
I may have wrote that line wrong
But doesn't change the fact that Tip killed this song
Anyway, I try my best to act fearless
But people talk about me as if I'm earless
And they say that they're my bro
But I know better, they a faux(foe)
And their loyalty goes, eenie-meenie-minie-mo
And you wonder why I'm alone, and cold inside
It's cause I got a lot of pain to hide
A lot of dirt on my mind, and skeletons in my closet
This food for thought the only dough I have left to deposit
Pour out-like a faucet, what's on my mind,
Wanna be high as the clouds, but I'm undermined
After my lightning strikes, get loud-thunder time
Never gonna decline, so you best get your act straight-align